March 3, 2009
Please Share Your Comments on BJJ Page 12
Please let us know what you think of Page 12 of Justice Served Cold.
The End is Near
Next week is the conclusion of the first story. Be sure to read below the artwork and visit the blog for all the information about where we go from here.
Lettering
Well, I may not be getting any better ARTISTICALLY — but I am definitely getting better LOGISTICALLY. I don’t think I could have done this page 10 weeks ago.Â
Whew.Â
Going around the cars in panel #3 and fitting everything in panels #4 - 7 was a lot of fun. (Right…)Â
On the plus-side I only had to cut 2 short lines from the script (Anyone know what they are? Gregg?) and panel #2 might have been the easiest of the story so far. 
Mark Â
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Gregg @ 8:59 am
Nope. No idea what was cut. It’s cheating to go back to the script or the recording, so I won’t. At a guess I’d say… oh, I don’t know… “Stop it?” The odds are pretty good, aren’t they?
Mark @ 9:56 am
Funny.
But…Yes. (Bottom of panel 6, BTW)
Also — “There isn’t time for the debutante dramatic society.” (Top of Panel 3)
Great line. Sorry.
Mark
MMA @ 9:50 pm
I think the A2 will be a good fit for you if you do not shrink it. My comments on thinking mine is too small are because I’m use to a very large kikskin GI and wearing a GI that is now snug and fits properly is rather strange and will take some getting use to.